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	<title>Comments on: 5 Tips to Avoid Writing Rejection, part 5: The Easy Opening</title>
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		<title>By: Peach</title>
		<link>http://travelwritelive.com/write/5-tips-avoid-writing-rejection-part-5-easy-opening/906/comment-page-1/#comment-4276</link>
		<dc:creator>Peach</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 25 Mar 2012 20:28:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Your information is an excellent supplement to the materials for a travel writing class I am taking.  I would like to post your blog to my &quot;Favorite Blogs&quot; list on my blog about hiking in California.  Your suggestion to delete the first paragraph is probably the most helpful advice I can apply.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Your information is an excellent supplement to the materials for a travel writing class I am taking.  I would like to post your blog to my &#8220;Favorite Blogs&#8221; list on my blog about hiking in California.  Your suggestion to delete the first paragraph is probably the most helpful advice I can apply.</p>
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		<title>By: Claire</title>
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		<dc:creator>Claire</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 21 Aug 2011 13:34:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Well those five pretty much rule me out of the game, even if I could relinquish my minor obsession with profanity ;)

But seriously, I&#039;ve been thinking about trying to appeal to editors recently, this advice is invaluable, so thank you :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Well those five pretty much rule me out of the game, even if I could relinquish my minor obsession with profanity <img src='http://travelwritelive.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_wink.gif' alt=';)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>But seriously, I&#8217;ve been thinking about trying to appeal to editors recently, this advice is invaluable, so thank you <img src='http://travelwritelive.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /><br />
<span class="cluv">Claire recently posted..<a class="ada49ca505 4136" rel="nofollow" href="http://www.travelpod.com/travel-blog-entries/koala_bear/5/1310659540/tpod.html">The British Vs The Meze — Πρωταράς, Cyprus</a></span></p>
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		<title>By: Lynn Newcomb Gaziano</title>
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		<dc:creator>Lynn Newcomb Gaziano</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 02 Nov 2010 17:41:21 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>More Please. Seriously, this was really helpful, concise and honest. I appreciate the advice.

Lynn</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>More Please. Seriously, this was really helpful, concise and honest. I appreciate the advice.</p>
<p>Lynn<br />
<span class="cluv">Lynn Newcomb Gaziano recently posted..<a class="2c2c4488c4 3196" rel="nofollow" href="http://www.bellaonline.com/articles/art51.asp">Haunted History Tours Barnstable</a></span></p>
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		<title>By: Devin Galaudet</title>
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		<dc:creator>Devin Galaudet</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 17 Jun 2010 08:02:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks Feather,

I can&#039;t take credit for inventing it. I had read it in a craft book years ago (I can&#039;t remember the title) and then later from a professor (Bernadette Murphy). It finally sunk in after reading a lot of writing that fished around for an opening that didn&#039;t get rolling until the second paragraph. I have gotten used to deleting my own openings. Depending on the writing I am doing, it might end up being the first few pages. Even though it sounds drastic, it can be quite liberating.
d
.-= Devin Galaudet&#180;s last blog ..&lt;a href=&quot;http://travelwritelive.com/?p=1572&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Free Stuff: All Four of Lonely Planet’s National Park Guides&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks Feather,</p>
<p>I can&#8217;t take credit for inventing it. I had read it in a craft book years ago (I can&#8217;t remember the title) and then later from a professor (Bernadette Murphy). It finally sunk in after reading a lot of writing that fished around for an opening that didn&#8217;t get rolling until the second paragraph. I have gotten used to deleting my own openings. Depending on the writing I am doing, it might end up being the first few pages. Even though it sounds drastic, it can be quite liberating.<br />
d<br />
.-= Devin Galaudet&#180;s last blog ..<a href="http://travelwritelive.com/?p=1572" rel="nofollow">Free Stuff: All Four of Lonely Planet’s National Park Guides</a> =-.</p>
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		<title>By: Feather Ives</title>
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		<dc:creator>Feather Ives</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 17 Jun 2010 01:19:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thank you, Devin. I enjoyed reading the 5-part series.  I most enjoyed &quot;delete the first paragraph.&quot;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you, Devin. I enjoyed reading the 5-part series.  I most enjoyed &#8220;delete the first paragraph.&#8221;</p>
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		<title>By: Devin Galaudet</title>
		<link>http://travelwritelive.com/write/5-tips-avoid-writing-rejection-part-5-easy-opening/906/comment-page-1/#comment-143</link>
		<dc:creator>Devin Galaudet</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 16 Feb 2010 07:32:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks Telaina,

I tried to keep travel writers and the writerly world at large in mind  when putting together this list.
d</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks Telaina,</p>
<p>I tried to keep travel writers and the writerly world at large in mind  when putting together this list.<br />
d</p>
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		<title>By: Telaina</title>
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		<dc:creator>Telaina</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 14 Feb 2010 20:11:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Good advice for travel writing yes, but writing in general too. :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Good advice for travel writing yes, but writing in general too. <img src='http://travelwritelive.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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